Sequence of events. These sketches show the layers of
my drawing and the story.
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1. The background, the approach to the garden and some
of the garden and fruit. This layer would be printed.
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2.
The child is consumed by the plant; the berries are thrown to indicate this.
This layer would be printed but you would be able to see the context from the
previous layer.
3. The child is trapped within the flower, this
is a paper cut out of a section of a flower.
4. Foreground- The child is saved by the bumble bee, this is a printed layer.
Model experiments, layers of paper.
These images show a selection of the prototype model I
made with slots so each layer can be changed. I have been experimenting with
paper cuts and different layering types as well as different arrangements and
materials. I have decided I think to use trace to print onto as it still
creates a question of what is beneath and how the scenario came to be without
showing you explicitly. It is shown in the bottom of these photographs. I have
also decided to do my paper cut as a more zoomed in section through the plant
(as shown in the top sequence of photos) as I feel it is more successful that
the cut shown in middle set of photos.
Narrative:
She had eaten all of the berries for
supper.
Her mother was despairing.
How did her daughter turn out to be so
greedy? She would ask.
She was sent out the yard.
She was outraged with his mothers
reaction, why should she share? The greedy girl snuck down the path away from
the house and letting herself through a gate she found paradise. A garden like
no other with wild berries and huge yellow flowers like ice pops. It was a
haven. As she ate the berries, a luxurious swarm of juice took over her mouth.
She ate more. And more. And more. She began to fill her baskets and her pockets
for later. The yellow plants began to sway as she became delirious with
excitement, they began to chant, ‘stop, stop’, beetles crawled out of their
holes, swarming around her but she couldn’t stop the fruit was too tasty. She
always wanted more. She didn’t share. Until the yellow flowers sways became
more ferocious enclosing around her. She dropped her basket as the white petals
enclosed around her and found herself being pulled into the flower.
Silence. She was trapped within the
petals, there was no way out as she pulled at the petals and she was trapped
for days, weeks maybe, she did not know. She could eat nothing but nectar. At
first she refused to eat. Beetles came as she learnt they ruled this paradise
they scared her and eventually then she learnt to enjoy what she had. The
nectar began to taste better and the plant bloomed; the greedy girl was kind
and giving again. The bumble bee came later that day to collect the nectar from
the flower, and she was released with the nectar, to share her tale with
others.
She was never greedy again.
What is the mechanism by which you are layering the sequence of events in the story? Are you going to have handles at the top or the side? You need to be carefully working this out.
ReplyDeleteI can see how the elements of your story start to build up in the flower; however the current background doesn’t quite work. The gate at the centre of the composition seems out of place and does not help you in setting up your context. I realise you want to indicate an entrance into this ‘paradise garden’ but there are other ways you could do this in a more subtle manner. You should also consider having more depth in the background, a single photograph ‘flattens’ the whole drawing, it is no longer ‘immersive’ – at the moment is too ‘crafty’. Abstraction and sophistication! You also need to work one more detail for the foreground elements.