1-3 different layers of trees and clouds.
4. Dark forest
5. Character
Narrative:
The sun has gone down.
A little blue bird flies in a dark forest, trying to find her way out. From the distance, she can see faint light shining through a hole in a tree. Her curiosity summons her to fly through the hole, towards the mysterious, glowing garden awaiting her. The twisted, tangled branches of the ancient trees seem impossible to defy. Surprisingly, the branches awaken and wave at her. Then they form into many arches. The curious little bird tries to fly over the arches in order to leave the garden. However, no matter how hard she tries, she is unable to as the- clouds blur her vision. Eventually she finds herself in a cloud garden, full of enormous singing flowers and butterflies dancing around her. She joins in with the singing and dancing. The clouds, the sound and the illusion slowly eat up her memory. She is so entranced; her departure doesn’t even cross her mind. She forgets about going home, about the past, about the real world…
Too little work. We need to see tests of 3d elements as well as your layers. The composition of your drawing is weak and the visual narrative is missing! At the moment your written text has more fantasy than your drawing. You need to work out how you will differentiate the foreground from the middle ground and the background. You need to post an update indicating your layers clearly by tonight.
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